| Trust me with our future Trust me with our future! Today I am going to tell you about animals, our sustainable future and global warming so make yourself comfortable. Already, because I care about our wild animals. I think that all animals should have rights because it is unfair that animals have to be in captivity. All the animals in the zoo want to be in the wild. Look at those ugly face pressed against the zoo glass windows gasping, pointing and snotting all over the place. Aren't they disgusting?!?! I feel that all people should work together for peace between animals and humans. What do you think? My second reason why you can trust me with our future is because our sustainable future. Is it going to be sustainable for humans and animals to be in peace and harmony. well what do you think? Plastic has been a problem seance 1907 when a guy called leo invented it. He wanted to make the world a ‘’ better place’’ he just made it worse but don’t hate him for making plastic he didn’t know any better. Un-biodegradable Plastic that disgusting thing. Why would Mr Leo make something so bad you ask, well he had a problem in his world there was not a strong enough paper to hold things such as paper bags to hold shopping and make book covers. Un-biodegradable Plastic in my eyes is a bad thing.What do you think about my opinion? My third reason is, Global warming is harming the planet. The amur leopard is a endangered species because there habitat has been cut down by us humans. This is not very good for the amur leopard there population is declining because of, us humans. This problem is going to get bigger until there's no more. The world as we know it, this beautiful planet, will be gone. We need to change for the better of our earth. Carbon dioxide is a greenhouse gas one of four and if these greenhouse gasses are helping us by trapping the heat of the sun. I have told you how you can help make the world a better place. By banning animal captivity they all need to be in the natural habitat. We can also help by using renewable resources. We can all help by doing these things. I hope I have changed your perspective on these points and you believe that the best project you can work on is me and my generation by educating us to do the right thing for our environment. So trust me, trust me with our future Thank you, good bye. reflection: I think I made my self clear and organised it well. I would of changed my sentance structure. I enjoyed making this speech. I found it medium diffaculty. |
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Trust me with our future speech
WALT: To write a persuasive speech
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Good job John! I like how powerful the speech is, it really impacts the audience. I also agree that we should try to decrease our pollution levels. But there are a lot of spelling errors, like seance, when it should be since, seance means a meeting to try and bring back the dead. I don't think you meant that, besides a few spelling mistakes, you did awesome on that speech! I hope this comment will help you with your future writing. Goodbye! Have a good day!
ReplyDeleteThank you nick
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool because you did heaps of writing and it looks awesome
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